Oasian

Vouch!

Thanks Turbo!

Hi deadlyflower, I'm glad that you are showing interest in going for Oasian. However, I have a couple suggestions for you. Please don't take my post as hating on you or anything, I'm just trying to help you be the best you can be with some constructive criticism in terms of this application. 

Even though all the necessary information is in the application, it is really confusing and looks kinda unprofessional for applying for a rank like this. Maybe put all the questions in the correct order in there, you just don't need to answer the personal ones. This isn't a big deal, just a small way you can make it look a bit better. 

Second, that is nowhere near enough information for the section about why you deserve Oasian and what sets you apart. For somebody like me who is not active in-game, all I'm going off is what you say on here and what I hear about you from others. What you put is basically 4 points: you're helpful, you're nice, you're active, and you think it would be cool to have it. These things do not set you apart from others - this is almost everybody on the server. My suggestion would be to think of more good qualities that you have that would help your case here and some stuff that would truly set you apart from others and add it because this application seems really lacking right now. 

Please don't take this negatively, I'm just trying to help you. I hope you take what I said into consideration, and good luck!

Thank you for the info I will fix it up now!